That poem is intense! i love it and i can't wait for part 2!
keep up the great work :)
5/5

p.s thanks for the comment on one of my poems!! i always return the favour lol

Its always easy to tell when someone writes from the heart ,the sincerety comes through.excellent.

Great poem! can't wait for part 2
5/5

xo kisses xo

Lovely and I can't wait for part 2 to come out.

Great poem i love it keep writing ur really good

Aww this is really sad, but you wrote it so well. i defiantly enjoyed reading it. you have a way with words. keep on writing 5/5

~Kristina

Looking forward to part 2 :D

xxx alex xxx

:) Excellent *** waiting for part two.

This is beautiful poem but broken. Im sry for you but it happens but i wish your mother can love you and refuse to leaven you alone. Darn, but i know u r going to be okay. It is okay for you to be angry but not all the times. Yeah...i hope i can read more poems of yours. Yup.

My life was taken away,
the day you ran from me.
My heart beating in a hollow hell,
there's not much to tell..

Wow so well written and outstanding lines. Love to read the second part as soon as possible. Keep up the good work.