Comments : I'm Sorry Mom

  • 13 years ago

    by Jezzika

    WOW! I love this! I mean it is very well writen! I give it 5/5. It is very well writen!
    Keep up the good work.

    @!Jezzika!@

  • 13 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Beautiful

  • 13 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow Wallace, that was a really sad poem. I've read a story, similar to this, somewhere on the Internet. Was that the inspiration? Anyway, great job! I liked the way you repeated "I'm sorry mom" It really added emotion to your piece. Thanks for your comment! :)

    Ciao~

  • 13 years ago

    by Riz

    I love it! This is a really good poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by malina

    Wow..im 13 myself and for a guy that's 14 you're really good...first one i've ever met..anyways...great poem..hope to read more

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetic Grunt

    I know how you feel man i really do

  • 12 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Loved it, it tells people to always listen to your parents, they're trying to steer you to the right direction, at least thats what I think.

  • 12 years ago

    by June

    What a beautiful poem ,written with such emotion.As a mum i would be proud of any of my kids if they wrote a poem just for me.keep writing you have a talent ,look forward to reading many more from you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Perfection

    This was excellent... Thi style of writing is very effective where each stanza starts the same way...
    Also a very well formed storyline and each stanza reveals just a litle bit more...

    Overall great job. Enjoyed this very much

  • 12 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Such a tragedy and beautifully written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Well I must say, I am amazed...
    i really liked it, it has feeling...
    must say you're skilled!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    I bribed the owners and voted 7/5...

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha

    Your poems are really good. thankyou for rating my poem. I think i want to wite poems when i am older. Keep upthe good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by girl

    I think i got a little teary. i L-O-V-E the last line. it sounds like song lyrics. pretty amazing. 5/5 <3 -Tara-

  • 12 years ago

    by Tamara Thurman

    That was a really great poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by Psycho93

    Beautiful poem 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by your letting me die baby

    I really love this poems it wikked
    keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Can't stand this!
    it's too damn well written

  • 12 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I love the topic, so many people feel they need to experience this before they put an end to it. I liked how you set it up, the flow was nice but it was a bit weak. It could had beed a bit more mature. Good job.

    {4/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelsi

    I love this Poem!! I never had a good realtionship with my mom but i really want to because if i lost her or if i was lost then i wouldn't want to leave the world knowing i didn't do the best i could i. I hope ever out there relizes that i mothers love is the best even if your mother is into drugs or deosn't treat you right remember the times that she was there! Thanks for the poem keep up the great work!!