Wow Wallace, that was a really sad poem. I've read a story, similar to this, somewhere on the Internet. Was that the inspiration? Anyway, great job! I liked the way you repeated "I'm sorry mom" It really added emotion to your piece. Thanks for your comment! :)
What a beautiful poem ,written with such emotion.As a mum i would be proud of any of my kids if they wrote a poem just for me.keep writing you have a talent ,look forward to reading many more from you.
I love the topic, so many people feel they need to experience this before they put an end to it. I liked how you set it up, the flow was nice but it was a bit weak. It could had beed a bit more mature. Good job.
I love this Poem!! I never had a good realtionship with my mom but i really want to because if i lost her or if i was lost then i wouldn't want to leave the world knowing i didn't do the best i could i. I hope ever out there relizes that i mothers love is the best even if your mother is into drugs or deosn't treat you right remember the times that she was there! Thanks for the poem keep up the great work!!