Nicely written, I was about to eat dinner until I read this. It almost made me want to cry. Anyways great jub and keep up the fab job

Pier pressure =O
I loved the poem. It tells a good story!
5/5

.......... hmm.....beautiful.

Oh!! This is so sad!! I love it so much. I love the ending. it was just so good. keep writing! 5/5

` Liz =]

You are an amazingg writer.
Veryy good poem

thanks for the comment!

Peer pressure is a hard thing. Lots of emotion in this poem.

Very good...i liked the way you broke it down...the wording was just perfect but it could have been a bitlonger if u put some in the middle

That's good, but sad. I hope this really didn't happen to you. Did it?

Hey I am returning a favor 2 u. Well...keeping up good job. this is really great poem. well...its good thing to let young people to listen to their parents. good job. I hope 2 read more of your poems. u can read mine anytime. take ur time.

From K

You are very good for your age.It is a shame many kids wake up too late ,very well done.

Very well written, and terribly true.

Omg, thats is so sad. You always have a refreshing twist, i like your writeing a lot!

That was really good...and hey thanks for the comment on my poem!! 5/5

Thanks for commentin on my poem murder or suicide
this poem of urs is wonderful
loved reading it
5/5
love
amy

I loved it so sad but its such a great poem

Ohhhh my goshhh.
that was amazzinggggg.
that was one of the only poems that grabbed my attention and gave me goosebumps at the end. love it.
-jenae

Good poem! you really know how to write!:)

~jessica lillian

This is a great poem!

Awwww this is so so so sad.... i almost cried... its really good....and i love the repeatition of "im sorry mom"..it made the poem more interesting....this is very well written...nice job.5/5

Definitely a shocking and mixed feeling ending. i got goosebumps and thats rare for me to get while reading poetry. Great flow and such a sad story..Great job!