Excellent imagery....you have a way with your writing that lets the reader see your visions.

Shattered dreams caused
By Satan's pernicious acts
Human immortality split
Psycho bludgeoning bash

Very scary word choices great.
Take Care
Love Cindy

Wow what a great poem i never read anything like it before great job :}

Hope is now forlorn
Conclusion of perilous treason
Unspeakable atrocities committed
Winters ending season

Masterly penned. The imagery used is amazing. You are a true inspiration to all you write. 5/5

Wow that poem was crazy, but you do write really good you have an imagination and thats what makes a poem good. 5/5

Great word usage I needed a dictionary to read this poem and thats a great thing. I love learning new words :). Very well done I got lost a few times but I think thats my own fault for not knowing some of the words :p

Okay. you got a lot of good words but the poem doesnt make since. some parts do but the whole thing is just too much...

Nice, Very Nice. =D

The poem makes sense ...it is a excellent piece.....you should reread the poem.

Very good poem, I enojoyed it, keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment some of my poems.

Dark and beautifully written. it's almost like a dream, really. luv it!!

WOW i wiwsh i new big words tike
did u look i a dictionary for those words
i would have had to if it was me

WOW!! Great job!! And very nice use of vocabulary!! 5/5

AWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME!

Awsome poem that was great I give it a 10

Awsome poem that was great I give it a 10