Your Kiss

Re-arrange the sentences a bit , it will help the flow of the poem greatlly
it's good , but surely you can make it beter

keep it up

It's nice. but kinda short. i still like it though.
xoxox
miss lostxinxlife

Nice poem

Beautiful!!! i loved it, every word was pure and cute! great job!

luv always---tara

Aww that was sooo good!!!...i loved it!1.. 5/5 from me, and would you mind commenting some of my new poems too!.. thanks soo much