One More Chance

by Curry   Apr 6, 2007


Lets give our love one more chance,
One more chance to make it right.
Lets share one more dance,
One more dance thats last all night.
Lets forget about everything in the past,
Forget it all,
This time lets make it last.
Forget all the fights we've had,
Remember the good times,
Forget the bad.
Forgive me for all the times I've hurt you,
Baby please forgive me,
And I'll forgive you too.Forget all the hurtful words we've said,
Forget that at one time those words were true,
Remember baby I love and need you.
Please lets give our love one more try,
Just take my hand.
I promise this time I wont make you cry,
Just please understand.
Understand that loving you is a must,
And I really want things to work out with us.
So,baby,now that you know how I feel,
Will you make everything with us romance?
Will you make me once again feel real,
Will you give our love one more chance?

written by:Curry on 3.12.07

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  • Good poem.
    It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I wish that everything was like this - wishing for one more chance. I tend to do that a lot.
    This was a beautiful poem.
    The flow was flawless.
    The word usage was good.
    & the emotions were strong & clear.
    Fantastic job!! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    This was better. Very cute poem!
    I really liked this one. The rhyme
    seemed to be forced in some patches
    of the poem. Well thank you for the
    comments. I hope you didn't take my
    comments offensive, just giving you
    advice for future reference. God Bless
    5/5 <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it again with the flow it was a tad bit off but other than that i think you did a pretty good job

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    This poem is amazing. Very well written. The flow was really good. well done.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea