Faraway for Far too long

by Curry   Apr 6, 2007


I haven't seen you in over a year,
Its been way too long.
Even though you are faraway,in my heart you are still near,
But without you here,its so hard to stay strong,
Baby you've been faraway for far too long.
I need to see you now,
I need you here with me.
Baby I'm about to break down,
Without you here,I feel like I cant see,
I feel like it's so hard to breathe.
I need to be in your arms,
I need to look into your eyes.
I need you here to keep me safe from harm,
I need you here before I cry,
Before I die.
I need you here to make everything alright,
To do away with all the wrong.
I need you here with me tonight,
Because,baby,you've been faraway for far too long.

written by: curry on 3.18.07

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    The feelings portrayed in this one were heartbreaking - about losing someone you love. The flow was a bit off - but overall, it was wonderful. Keep it up! 5.5

    Stephaine Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    I liked this poem.
    Your good at writing these kind of poems.
    well done.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    The whole poem portrayed the feeling of a lost love and the yearning to have it back..
    Well done sweets
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    The flow was a little off but it can easily be fixed if you count your syllabols

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wasn't what I expected to read, but I wasn't let down. It was cute, but still a little cliched, I don't know...you're still very young and have a lot of time to improve but I just think you should try to write some ideas down and then put it together after or something so it doesn't seem so cliched...don't get me wrong, I did like it, there was just something sorta off about it. But you are good though. (:

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