Boy I Need You

by Curry   Apr 6, 2007


Boy I need you,
Cant you see?
Boy I love you,
I want you to love no one but me.
Boy I miss you,
If you only knew.
I want you back so bad,
You were the best thing I ever had.
Boy I need you,
Cant you tell?
My life without you is a living hell.
Come on,open your eyes,
Cant you see that I love you?
Without you I feel like I'm gonna die.
Boy I need you,
Cant you see?
Boy I love you,
I need you to love me.

written by: curry on 3.20.07

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I suggest use stanzas. It will make your poem more organized. Also use a rhyme scheme instead of jumping from rhyming to not rhyming. The poem was cute. Needs some work. God bless 4/5
    <3Tayy

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Okay first no poem is ever stupid it's an expression of our inner most feelings that's like saying your feelings and beliefes are stupid. Well I liked this one it got a little to repetitive for my taste but I liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Great poem. It's not stupid. You did a really good job. Keep it up! 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Cliche? Yes. But when it comes to love poems, when aren't they? Lmao. =]
    And no, it was not stupid at all. Actually, it was beautiful poem. =]
    I loved it! 5/5
    Wonderful write, keep it up!

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is such a lovely poem, it shows how much you love him. 5/5 from me.

    Kalee

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