That was amazing and really heart felt i wish i could write like that, you're so good could you please comment my poem?
All my Life. thanks

Very good first poem it was excellent. It was well written and organized and had strong feeling put into it. You have a talent and keep it up, 5/5

Sweet and loving poem. i wish i had someone to love =[. you're so lucky. this poem was excellent. i really do hope you keep on writing cause i would defiantly love to see more of your work. you have talent! 5/5

~Kristina