Hey i realli liked dis poem easy to relate to nd i gave it 5/5 keep up tha great work nd i luv all ur quotes 2:P

I like your poem ...very creative...has a lot of meaning...i like your imegry! good job

Very beautiful work....i loved it..n i could relate too...perfect choice of words n the flow was great too...n the imagery created was Amazing....filled with meaning n depth..
5/5!=)
xxPoojaxx

I like the rhyme, and the flow is natural. Really good poem.

Wow, I like this poem. It's beautiful.
Nice name too.

I loved this!!! It's beautifully written, and i can relate.

Really sad.. Well done!!! 5/5

Gawd.i love this so much
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5/5 i can totally relate to it... amazing well done

Btw love this verse

Hidden beneath a foundation disguise,
Gleaming tears, a million sorrowful cries;
With eyeliner and mascara uncontrollably bleeding,
No longer able to hide, her pain is revealing.

its just truly amazing no other words for it

Hmm I liked the beginning of the poem, the emotion sent out, was well clearly recieved..on my part at least. The flow I thought wouldve been better and may enhance the emotion given off by the poem and it read a little rough, other than that..the poem was pretty solid. Keep writing =D

-Bon

Hmm I liked the beginning of the poem, the emotion sent out, was well clearly recieved..on my part at least. The flow I thought wouldve been better and may enhance the emotion given off by the poem and it read a little rough, other than that..the poem was pretty solid. Keep writing =D

-Bon

Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5

Nazeer

I loved it it was deep,sad,and so true in some way........great poem

Aww thats a really cute poem you did an amazzing job <33

That Was Beautiful.. Its Like You Wrote How I'm Feeling..

That was great
i can totally relate
great work!

Marissa.

Love this poem it just shows that people who look perfect on the outside are just like everyone else and do have problems thanks i loved it..x

You are really talented!!!

Luv this poem its amazing, its deep and shows great emotion great job

5/5