My angel

by Kelso   Apr 6, 2007


Stay up all night
see your eyes,
dream of you...
you're my angel (in disguise)
your smiles my sun
your love is my life,
my heart beats fast
your my only paradise.
You stole my mind...
my heart, my soul,
and I want be with
you till I grow old!

* my best friend wrote this, but she don't think shes good so i thought i would put on here and see what you guys think*

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  • 16 years ago

    by ILoveRobbie

    Nah..... man this poem is absoultely GREAT! Tell her I said to keep up the good work, and don't think her work isnt good, because it's not its GREAT! ~Neely~

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel R Rodriguez is the star of my eye i love him so much

    U are good keep writting

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was really good!...the only thing is tho is that there were some spelling mistakes, but other than that great!!...5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelso

    This poem was actually written by a very dear friend that i love so but she dont think she is good. so i thought i would put it on here and see what you guys think of it!

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