This poems really sad and the emotions are strong. I think you did an awsome job portraying your feelings. Well done steph. ~mel

I really loved the emotion in this poem it was sweet and seemed to come straight from your heart.
Well done with this poem i found it to be beautiful. ~mel

Very good poem I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and coment on my poems and I'll return the favour.

Good job 5/5 i really like it.
kepp up the good work=))))

"I love it when your near me
but hate it when your gone..." (sic) (= You're is mispelled here.)

"If that was an easy option,
then there would be no option at all." I have to giggle reading this line, 'twas so true!

Anyway, other than the technical errors, you have written, overall, a fine piece of poetry. Bittersweet, I must say. Having the thought of missing someone you hold dear in your heart is troublesome. Even so, like you said, it's worth the while. =]]
A cute read. Thanks for sharing.
Love,
Debbie

Hm. this doesn't feel like a thought out poem, structured poem. more like an elaborated train of thought. i suppose it's arguable that all poetry is like that though, eh?
still, i like the way i can imagine this thought process happening. controlled and yet entirely raw. it's really nice to read something that doesn't feel like it's been edited and re-worded over and over again. i like the natural feel to it. it's lovely.x

I'm not sure...the idea behind it was sweet, but the actualy poem was lacking the "umph" in my opinion.
I think the wording was the main reason for this; it wasn't very poetical. You seemed to repeat yourself too much aswell..."hate" for example in the first stanza was used twice to express the same thing.
Sorry I couldn't be more positive about this.

Great one
you have done a wonderful job.......
it really touched me.
a 5/5 from me

This poem was pretty good, but when I read it, it doesn't keep me hanging on and wanting to continue reading. Not that there is anything wrong, because writing is expressive, but it was just missing some emotion in my opinion.
"If that was an easy option,
then there would be no option at all."
Those lines were written well, because I think the reason they stand out to me, is because they have meaning that I can relate with.
kaitlynx.

Cute poem, I really enjoyed the meaning behind it because it's so similar to the relationship I had with my ex-girlfriend. Props :)

~jas~

The flow in this poem was shaky and needs work. You poem lacks a bit of structure or what I like to call "organization". Well it was a very sad, but sweet love poem. Missing someone is a painful feeling. God Bless 5/5
<3Tay(^__^)

Very heartfelt write. Great job, the flow and structure where both good. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Awh. I liked this poem, a lot. I wish EVERYONE could feel that way, it would make life a lot less rougher, and emotional.
You did a great job with this poem; lovedit.
Keep it up.

Your poem speaks the truth... i bet a lot of people can relate to this one... for one thing im missing someone right now too... missing someone can be a mixed emotion and you displayed it nicely here... good job :)

~angel~

Very sweet poem!...i can sooo relate!!...excellent choice of wrds!...Wonderful peice!

Oh see I really like dis one its very good. U go girl keep it up.

This is beautiful i love the way it flows and i love the way you use your words....5.5 Thankz for commenting mine sorry it took so long to comment yours.

Great peom wonderful flow and spirit i think you did a wonderful job on it thanks for the comment also

keenan

This is a cute poem and it speaks truly of how distance makes you fonder of the person when you actually get to see them once again. This is a cute poem!! Great Job hun!! 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Another great poem. Very nice flow. I loved it:) 5/5