Chilling ...dark ...beautifull....

FeEl LiKe GiViNg Up

Very vivid!! Loved it.

Beautiful imagery and the words are nicely connected with this piece. The beginning was an attention getter and was maintained in the piece. The beginning and ending seemed the stronger points. The middle though good didn't have that....strength. Still it flowed nicely and was actually good for an unrhyming verse.
~Faith-less

Nice
deep
real
sensational

That was amazing!!... the flowing was smooth, and it was really deep...5/5 from me, and THANK YOU for the comment! haha

but yeah we have like similar pasts or something haha bc all those poems that relate to you exactly, relate to me exactly which is why i write them haha

Yeah that is what happens when you graduate.... so are you a junior or what? haha

Im assuming you can't drive right? haha or can you bc i know some sophmores who can drive haha

So do you have an AIM screenname? haha

Haha oo thats cool... i can drive, and i love it haha its awesome haha

Wow. amazing poem. a lot of emotion. i love the lines "Things hidden are meant only for me, help is a drug that leaves a happiness, a
new future". good job!

Excellent peom.. beautiful..dark love it
You're really taleneted && make for great reading.
Keep it up =]
xxx
thanks for the comments too

That was really good. You can really feel the passion. Great job. If u have any chance check out my poems and quotes. Peace.
keani loves koa