Heya, I really liked this poem it was an enjoyable read. The only thing i think is you used some words to many times over. Other then that i liked this well done ~mel

I really like this one...and i've felt the same way before many times.....yes its very painful... ^^i disagree with the person above.. i dont think you used some words too many times...

nice job.

Wow that last line !!

another amazing poem!

5/5