This is a great poem.
Very well stated.
Although...
Maybe you should space out
The lines a bit more.
For example:
The past is the key, to the future I see.
You could turn that into
The past is the key
To the future I see.
Other than that, well done.

This is a great poem.
Very well stated.
Although...
Maybe you should space out
The lines a bit more.
For example:
The past is the key, to the future I see.
You could turn that into
The past is the key
To the future I see.
Other than that, well done.

Wow =) 5/5
Another great one Nick *like always* =D
Keep up the fantastic work my friend ^.^
Hugs, Rhea =)

YOU GAVE ME A ONE LINER there is no point of commenting if it is going to be a one liner. That is why this is pointless. grr its what you get

The syllables are somehow not compatible but the wording and flow is good
I especially liked those

The past is the key
To the future I see.

Keep it up nick