Its a great poem and the repeating of the phrase "but you weren't there, you didn't even care" worked well. Just one question, what does "ONEGAI" mean?
I could relate well to this poem - keep your head up
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I liked the repetition of this poem. although i think you should make this poem into stanzas to make the format look a little bit better. The ryhme was good but the flow seemed a little off. Well done none the less ~mel