Comments : Imperfection

  • 16 years ago

    by Marissa

    Loving your poem! Keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marissa

    Btw! Don't give in to them!

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    ANNNNNNDREAAAAAA!
    I usually use big words to sound all smart
    BUT I HAVE ABANDONED IT ALL
    I frickkkkennn loved this poem
    I hav tears in my eyes. See what uve done. Ur making me cry. Didnt i ever teach you anything little missy!? Perfection does not exist. Ur the closest thing that I could ever find to perfect. Ilyyyyyyyy! veryveryveryveryveryMUCH
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Marie

    Omg.. i so get it.. it's so depressing but so many people feel this way! BRAVA

  • Awesome poem keep it up ill look forward to your next poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Flirting with suicide

    Wow this is really deep!! I really like it. It definately captures the way a lot of girls feel these days, including myself.

  • 16 years ago

    by stacyneedsyou x3

    This poem is really great. i love the emotion you put into it, and how you write a poem lots of ppl can relate to! good work.

    *Thanks for the comment!

    - stacy. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    Wow so deep so BEAUDIFUL awesome job 5/5 def! cynthia m. X]

  • 16 years ago

    by The Nameless Poet

    Damn, never mind me your a great writer lol thank you very much for your comment, it's nice to get some recognition for the things i write about. this was GREAT!! by the way, i know a lot of girls who are in this same situation. i do my best to help open there eyes to the world in front of them and all the opportunities they can have and make for themselves instead of worrying about what others think about them. I've read some of your other poems and there very deep and great to read. 5/5 I'm a add you to my favorites, i haven't read any poems up until now that impressed me like this one. well thanks again for the comment. keep up your work pure and true, stay strong, keep your head up and pursue your goals with passion and don't let life slow you down...

    ~Infamous Woundz~ thats another alias i go by...lata

  • 16 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    I loved this!!! amazing! =o]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sasha

    Aww thats so sad

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Thatwas amazing, deep, and sad. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gypsy

    I really loved it, and I could relate to it as well, though maybe not to that extreme!
    And it flowed really well, especially seeing as it doesn't rhyme.
    Keep it up =]

  • 16 years ago

    by NeroB00

    Wonderful poem, yea ma poem is tru..

  • 16 years ago

    by Numb Handed

    Great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Damn... Tops mate! 10/10! Great use of words! Alot of emotion... and the story it tells really is a true one... that alot go through... and take that last stand of sorts. All in all... great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by carla

    Wow! that's so WOW =P i will keep reading your poems n_n i loved your poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    You feel
    like a weed in a sea of roses

    it's been much to cruel to you
    so say goodnight for the last time
    and prepare to be noticed for the first time

    what a wonderful piece my friend
    love it
    my best wishes for such powerful pieces

    your friend
    Rohan
    _
    If you get some time do read my new and old poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Si sI

    Great poem.. nice story and meaning.. i can really relate 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Excelent poem i thout it was very emotional.5/5= )

    Cory