Wow that was beautiful 5/5

Wow amazing, the description is so escatic ,great usage of words.

Excellent job.

Chavii.

Ahhh the sweet smell of a spring rain. When suddenly life comes forth once again.

Very nice job. You have done a fantastitic job setting the spring fever in even more.

--Sher

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Debbie
Your sadness can be felt in this poem...With the hopes of better things to come in June.....You have done an amazing job on this piece.

June welcomes Heaven
Immaculate shroud
Smiles from a rosebud
Laughs in a cloud

Hope June finds you laughing.
I Love You
Cindy

You described thru out this whole poem excellent description on the poem, spring.

welldone. i loved how you used every month of spring. thats a bonus.

5/5 David

June welcomes Heaven
Immaculate shroud
Smiles from a rosebud
Laughs in a cloud

Spring is always wonderful,
future days are always beautiful
some years have special meanings
yet some moments eclipse all.........
I see my heaven in June..........
in a shroud, I smile at flowering buds and laugh in clouds. Debbie you are............

Excellent flow and word choice. Thought provoking....I like the metaphor used here. you never cease to amaze me. Great job!

This is so refreshing, imagination itself makes you feel so good...very nicely written indeed

all the best and take care

Yes, this is a refreshing write. Let's hope the summer brings lots of laughter and joy for all of us. Let the sun brighten our days.

That is really deep, not sure i understood it completely but it had a good flow and sounded good to me. Very good poem.

Best Wishes
Wallace

"April's resplendent
With showers of pain
Teardrops on daffodils
Windmills of rain"

My fave stanza! The imagery was amazing, i loved the tear drop effect.
Excellent nature poem sweets
5/5
*Gem*

Very beautiful flow, intreging and influencial

......'laughs in a cloud'.........very sweet.....