I've noticed you seem to like the whole razor/wrist/girl combination, but I liked this poem better than the other one, because it had less focus and rather emphasized the point of your poem. Great work!
~jas~

Yes, that is one of my favorite combiniations. Thank you for the compliment!

This is a very dark well-written poem. The concept was very good. Not to mention the flow and word choice were great! 5/5

I thought this poem although good at the start was well played out until the last few lines. I think you cheapened your work with the cutting theme you had a good thing going but not really leading into the next thought you just jumped from one idea to another. Oh well nice try Plot121