This is pretty true David. Yet one thing i'd have to disagree with is that true love knows the truth, True Love can be very blind. I guess it also depends on the person. The flow was good and the rhyming great. Great job. =] 5/5

Tammie

This is a really good poem David. It had a wonderful flow to it. 5/5

Kalee

David
A wonderful view of the diffrences in love and true love. Great job!

Love is often in the air
Yet True love owns your heart
Love always comes together
Yet True love never falls apart

I really related to this stanza.
Take Care Cindy

Very nice and original,

"Love keeps you warm at night
But true love keeps you awake"

i loved those lines the most

Love and true love have such a fine line. One is often lost struggling trying to understand exactly where their heart lies. It is a wonder that anyone can sort the difference out without first hand experience.

You have worded beautifully both sides of the coin. Nice job.

--Sher

Wow oh so very true nice poem i love it i totally agree with you. 5/5

Wonderful poem...
=)

*isabel*

WOW!

I realllly like it.
its not corny at all & very sweet.

(^_^)

Love keeps you warm at night
Yet True love keeps you awake
Love is real, what you see
Yet True love is never fake

Such powerful words. And you're only 17?
So very true your words are.
Excellent

So true...Very nice poem.

Very cleverly written sir, i take my hat off to you!

Very beautifully written ,and certainly had me thinking ,maybe there is such a thing as true love.

Wow... this is a great perception of love and true love. Excellent write. Keep it up.

This is wonderful poem david, but also it has alot of flow to it. 5/5

I think it's a well done poem! i love it lots!

A true piece of work! 5/5

Absolutely lovely. A splendid job.

Damn, this one is really good, is this all yours? check my.

Very good, nice poem. It really defines true love, good job.

Nicely written and sweet love poem....