Flowers dancing gently in the breeze

by becca   Apr 8, 2007


Pure, sweet love,
Like visions of
Flowers
Dancing
Gently
In the
Breeze.
Soft romance,
As flowers dance,
And the
Wind
Wildly
Waltzes
Through the
Trees.
True adore,
In Terpsichore,
As branches
Bend and bop,
With careless ease.
And soft romance,
As flowers dance,
Dancing,
Dancing
Gently
In the
Breeze.

I've never written anything like this before, so your feedback and criticism will be much appreciated.

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  • 18 years ago

    by thandie

    I liked that, not alot of ppl write something like that i really liked it it was different while i read it i try to anylize it...
    but it has so many meanings to it ,
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by lil miss music

    VEry vivid i liked a lot. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a very nice poem!
    while i read it i try to anylize it...
    but it has so many hidden meanings in it...
    really good keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    I liked that, not alot of ppl write something like that i really liked it it was dif, and really cool u did it! 5/5 always

    Kate~

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