What is it that is hurting you Andrew? :(
Is there anything we can do?

This is really sad, i can empathise with life changing a lot in the past month though, mine has too. i liked this poem, my only criticism is that one bit (can't remember it but the stanza about being surrounded by sin) seemed a little force, apart from that i really enjoyed it, xx

That was really good, also very sad. If I were a person that didn't like poetry and was forced to read it, I would still really like it. That's a great talent. Be happy, and keep up the good work.