I liked the repitition of "hoping they will fade" i think this poem was very effective because it flowed well xx

Beautiful and deep...

*isabel*

Nice poem... very emotional... Good work!

When she thinks about him
she simply falls apart
knowing how that day
he completely broke her heart

^^amazing... sounds like someone i know haha... thanks for the comment!!1.. 5/5 from me,... hey guess what! im talking to you right nowww!!!!

Amazing.
Emotions were strong, the flow was flawless, and the word usage was awesome. As heartbreaking as this was to read, it was still an amazing poem. You're a wonderful writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Read few of your poems, must say you are really good, always full with emotions.
Good job 5/5
~Br0k3n

A good write, very well arranged very well done. Great job.

Okay you're awesome! if this isnt the poem you wrote for me and tht guy...lOl...thn i luv this one n-e-way! it tow-tuh-lee fits my luv life...=]! love it girlii! n-e-way...well its 1:15am so i guess i'll see you l8r today...lOl

This is my favorite great job girl...