I love your poem

Sourav, you have written excellent poem, so true your message is ,love is most beautiful emotion but at times it can takes too much with it.Very thoughtful poem,loved it. 5/5

Regards
chavii.

Heyy i really liked this poem. great use of words. thank u for ur comment on my poem. xx

Your poem is so true how love can take control of us at times
it was just a beautiful peice of art
luved it...kiara

Excellent job on your poem. You really give some thoughts to ponder. Good message.
Take Care Cindy

Hmm.. personally i belive in soul mates but that's only because i've got mine, before i met him i didn't.
And your right, love does take control of us. But i like it that way =)

But seriously, an excellent poem with a solid rhyme scheme and a lot of emotion. Aspects every good poem needs =)
5/5
*Gem*

This poem had a very good point in it and it was well written. My only critique is perhaps put more of a pattern in the lines. But I'm not saying it's bad, its very very good. I liked it.
<3Raych

thanks for commenting on my poem.

This poem had a very good point in it and it was well written. My only critique is perhaps put more of a pattern in the lines. But I'm not saying it's bad, its very very good. I liked it.
<3Raych

thanks for commenting on my poem.

Nicely written....true we can't get too caught up in love's fantasy...

This moon, sky, the whole galaxy
Love holds everything in its fantasy
But don't get overwhelmed by love's authority
If you're too naive might become love's property

^Love this stanza!

Enjoyed this...All the best, Debbie

Nicely written....true we can't get too caught up in love's fantasy...

This moon, sky, the whole galaxy
Love holds everything in its fantasy
But don't get overwhelmed by love's authority
If you're too naive might become love's property

^Love this stanza!

Enjoyed this...All the best, Debbie

This is quite delightful to read. I'm enchanted! The fact that you've written this as a word of warning with such beautiful descriptions is charming. I do believe that Love is the ideal of Life though... I like it very much! Thank you for sharing.

Beautifully penned poem...i loved it!...It's very powerful...Kp writing.
Tk care!God Bless!
xxPoojaxx

PS:thanx 4 de comment on my poem..

This is indeed very interesting, a different angle completly to look at power of love, loved it

all the best and take care

I consider this a great poem. Btw thx for commenting on my poem too. -Sora-

I really like your first stanza it really sets the scene, fantasic work honey xox lithium

I liked this poem a lot. Good work. 5+/5

~Lizzie~

I felt a cynical touch to this beautiful work of art, but in a good way. Very well written. I know all too well how love can take control of you. I love the last line Perfect!

A truthfull poem that comes with a real warning not to underestimate love :) 5/5

This moon, sky, the whole galaxy
Love holds everything in its fantasy

awwwwwwww i loved these stanza and specially these two lines. great work take care 5/5

Nice description about love.
good work