Comments : This Necklace

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Him him him. love love love. so very nice. i like how you repeated a bit about the heading.

    5/5 again David

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This is actually really good. It's short but it flows well and you had a point to it and it did make sense so well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I thought this was really cute for something you wrote when you were 12. I didnt like the repetition of him though it seemed a little forced but that doesnt really matter because the meaning behind this was very cute! well done ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    This poem is a bit confusing, but it's probably just me. I understand the concept, though. Or I understand it to some degree. I've interpreted it as not -really- knowing someone, but loving them anyway. Brilliant.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Could of been a little longer.
    But it was good.
    Nice job.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea