Very cute. You had quite a bit of mistakes. The poem wasn't very organized. I think you should have made your stanzas or words more together. The flow was rocky. This poem could use work. I'll give you a 4 because the poem wasn't great just good.
God Bless 4/5
<3Tayyy

Ooooh i really liked this one it was really well written and the beauty of your words made all of it seem perfect. an overall great write 5/5
nuff luv x