Comments : Ijustwanttowakeup.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    I love how you have your own unique style of writing
    good job

    brittany (MD)

  • 16 years ago

    by tyanna

    Again, I agree with both of them...Stanzas really do help poems flow and for readers to better understan them...But at the same time, you have a unique style of writting which is also good to have...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by oldthings

    I dont know why i liked this so much, I'm so used to reading set rhyme schemes, and this is completely different, it was a welcome change though. Favorite part was the wondering about the penguins, i have thought that before.

    Writing about dreams makes for a good read, i enjoyed it. thanks for sharing

  • 16 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Very good never read anything like it very different but great well done5-5

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. i really enjoyed reading this poem... written with such simple words and scattered thoughts but still the power and poetic sense it gives is wonderful,.. also if its not to much to ask i would really like to know what this poem means to you.. it seems that there is a lot more to it than what is on the surface.. but i cant seem to find it? message me if you dont mind?
    :]P

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Now this was diffrent, Way diffrent than any poem I have ever read on this site. I liked it. It intrigued me. The word choice keept my intrest
    The vivid descrptions played games with my mind. You did an excellent job. I like your style 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Darkening Dawn

    You remind me a lot of ee cummings... one of my favs. well done... i like it, it's different

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another different type of poem by you, im just wondering how u come up with these great ideas.lol

    I think soon you will have more readers than me because when i had the same amount of poems that u have now, i never had that much readers...........lol
    keep it up dude.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well this is a unique poem, It's really good to read something different now :) I think it flowed well, you have some errors.. but it's nothing big xD

    Just capitalize all the I's =)