Comments : Wall Flower

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This is really good. I liked reading it. It was short yet the flow was great and it made a lot of sense.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Hmm interesting write, the last line of the poem threw the general idea of the poem off. It just didn't seem to fit, or maybe it did but not as an ending to a poem. I liked the idea of the poem, how even the most wonderful and beautiful people that are most highly regarded, can be so unhappy. The title of the poem didn't seem to fit though, aren't wall flowers people who blend in to the crowd not stand out? I'm not sure if thats the word you were looking for. Other than that your discriptive word usage is beautiful, and your poem is a delightful read with a different way of looking at things.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Very nice, i like your imagery and idea of a person beign a wall flower, really well doen xox lithium