Good one, liked it. N liked the fact you didn't force the rhymes, good job. 5/5
~Br0k3n

Ohh lovely poem, I realy enjoyed reading it....You did an excellent job with this one, keep the coming =0)

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Love Sabrina

Lovely really :D
filled with lots of complete adoration.
i quite adore this part,
"My life has been a vicious battle
full of sorrow, defeat and pain.
But then you came into my life,
i knew my life was bound to change."
love it :) 5/5