I thought this one had a great message, I didn't care much for the way it was written, but all in all I did enjoy it. And it kept my attention. =)
-Ally

I liked the message behind this although i found the structure to be really off and making the poem look really un-neat. I think if you made the lines a similar length it would make it look so much better. good work tho ~mel

I liked the message didn't think it was very poem like? Least not form wise or anything it was still good though. I gave it a five none the less.

A very cute little poem with some nice messages behind it.
5/5
*Gem*

Wow short sweet and amazing

good job
brittany (MD)

Really nice...

*isabel*

Its a really touching poem, and I love it how you tend to repeat the topic of the lines..(hopefully u understand that lol) anyway I wanted to say well done and keep up the work!

The last line was a little to long to go with the rest of the poem. Great message. 5/5

Wow. That is really sweet. I like the simplicity of it.
5/5 :]

Awe cute =)
short and simple but to the point!

Love
Jacs
xxxx