One More Day

by Mousie   Apr 10, 2007


Meadow of flowers
Pearl white dress,
Sun lights my locks
His skin I caress.

Flowers of yellow
Tulips of red,
Hearts of salvation
Love has been bred.

Clouds of creation
Heavens so blue,
Angel's sweet melody
Keep me with you.

If only this day
Could really come true
I'd do anything
For one more day with you.

inspired by my baby and the country song One More Day. enjoy!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Wow i love how the verses are short but sweet and how the words flow so well, you are a truly amazing writer,

    5/5
    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by N.Lee

    Wow... ur poem flows so good.... i liked it! good job

  • 16 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Omg that is so sweet. 5/5!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow that was touching. The flow was flawless the word choice brillant,the emtions were strong. powerful write. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww!! This is wonderful! You did an amazing job!

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