Leap of Faith

by Rachel RTVW   Apr 11, 2007


Close my eyes and reminisce,
How sweet to be in memories bliss.
Time untainted with hurt and lies,
Time before the tears I've cried.
Fought my hardest, at all cost.
Now sorrowed by all we've lost.

A leap of faith I took with you,
And then received a love untrue.
I will forgive but never forget,
Giving you my all, I do regret.
Time was wasted, lesson learned.
Don't give your faith, unless it's earned.

*Written for a club to club contest

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Rachel,
    Sorry, it take too long for me to visit your stuff...

    This was beautiful expressive emotions poem you penned here, very inspirations yet well message.... even though simply... but flow well within beautiful ended! keep them coming, keep your smile whatever it may come, take care.

    Best wishes from west, Bert.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    The words spoken in this poem are so true, we sometimes leap at the oppertunity to fall in love while never considering the consequences. We know that we made a mistake and or precious time was wasted, but we now have experience on our side. With mistakes wisdom is earned and in time we we'll make very few, amazing poem 5/5 for sure

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This poem had so much emotion behind it, and unlike alot of poem i have read it has words that bring a so much more emotion into a piece. great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is a beautiful piece indeed, very strong message conveyed.

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very nice write rachel. nicely worded. 5/5 in my book.

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