I love your poem. I really get what your saying and im glad i read it......keep it up.

LYRIC

It's so true that when things get hard in life, they get really hard. sometimes everything just falls apart and you feel like just giving up, but in the end everything gets better. great job 5/5

I liked the meaning behind his poem i think you portrayed it very well. Although i found the word choice to be a little too commen for my liking. But well done with this~mel

So sad .............. it realy related to me.. i loved you work... very great may you live long

This one was better than the other one I read, it wasn't as cliched and it held so much irony in the line "Why am I here? What's the point?" .. because so many people often ask that question. I liked the ending to this one as well, it wrapped it up pretty good. Keep writing. =)

Awhh i can realte to this poem..ive felt this way before too. but things are getting better so hopefully they will for you too. but anyways great poem.

This was so very sad, yet so beautifully written.
I loved the opening, it really dragged me into the poem and the ending was such a perfect way to wrap things up.
beautiful work!

Main thing I liked about this poem was how it was easy to read.
It is thoughts that many teenagers think and that makes it a subject many poets write about.
But that doesn't make it bad, You just gotta try harder to beat the many other poets that have written about the same topic.

This needs a little more for me.
But was still good.
Not the best;not the worst. =]

I liked it because a lot of people can relate to it. Sure they're never right and they have friends and blah blah blah but it's just how they feel. 4.