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Awhh this is real sad too and im sorry all this happened to you:[ ive experienced depression too and yeah it sucks! but anyways i really liked the rhyming pattern in this poem..great job!

This poem has alot of deep emotion running throughout it the ryhme scheme was great and the flow was flawless. you really described what you feel. Well done on a great poem~mel

Thats sad.

I loved it, i could really relate, and it felt like someone was reading MY life to me

5/5 all the way

<3
Sarah

I loved it, i could really relate, and it felt like someone was reading MY life to me

5/5 all the way

<3
Sarah