Awh. Great meaning. I loved it. It was short yet it flowed very nicely and was amazing.

Comment #3

Oh wow.. (I hate starting comments like that!! lol)
But seriously. Those four simple lines have said about four paragraphs!
How did you do that! lol
Amazing little piece
It should have more comments than this! lol
5/5
*Gem*

(Thankyou for the comment on my fiance's poem, i know he'll be pleased =)

Tru tru

Oh what truth that lies within these words! I loved it. It was so short; but held great meaning.

Beauty is whats inside [whats should be what's]

It flowed really nicely, especially for such a short little piece. You really pulled it off, Hun.

For such a short and sweet poem..anybody could make a point but you make a point with deepness and feelings! Good job.. 5/5

Another straight to the point poem.
I really like how you put such small
amount of words into a small poem
but make it meaningful. Well done!
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Very nice poem. very true words. well done.
5/5

~Chelsea

Good poem, i liked it. It was strait to the point and did a wonderful job of getting there. 5/5

An incredibly vast statement in a few short lines. Those four lines are beautiful. Short and simple, very nice.

Thanks. 'Tis is an endearing write. It was a little smiler poem, it did make me smile! =]] Simply written, yet something deeper and profound lies within when dug out. Well done upon writing such a cute poem. all the best and take care.
Marian =]

So true! your poems are so simple yet so brilliant! keep it up bub.

Thats so true i wish other people new it too

Wonderful so very short yet so sweet, but not over the top in any way. When you gave me the title I was expecting a very long winded poem about love yet this was a completly lovely suprise.

Umm..
Poetic?
Yes?
Cliched?
Yes.
But it seems that this belongs to quotes section.
Lol.
I made that mistake too for mine

This seems more like a quote rather then an acctual poem. But i get what your trying to say thought most people do believe that beauty is about apperiance and stuff like that. I know this is bad but its society. Looks are infact everything. Whats inside... people dont see thats real beauty, they think its all skin deep. So yeah i loved the messgae in this poem. But i thought you should of expanded it a little. It was way to short. The messgae was clear and staright to the point though. Try using pounctuation next time? Keep writing though. xx

Really great, i enjoyed it, 5/5

I kind of agree that it should be under quotes, but then againi also have something short in my poems. :) Another great message... Keep it up!!! 5/5

Josie

This is good
so tru
if only everyone thought like you
xoxox

Right on girl, this was great short & simple but with wonderful meaning

Short-true-amazing-wow is all i can say.
katrinamarie