Comments : The Burning Bridge

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Found some mistakes but I liked it none the less.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this poem because i could relate too it in some ways about the ending a friendship and the burning bridge.
    There were a few mistakes in this poem
    for example:
    "She [were] the charm, and I was the luck"
    Shouldnt this be:
    "She [was] the charm, and I was the luck"
    One thing i didnt understand was
    "We shared a boyfriend" Like i didnt understand it really maybe its just me. none the less i found this poem to have a fair amount of emotion running through it. Seemed like it came from the heart. Well done ~mel