Kiara,

This was a very beautiful and sad poem. I must have read it 3 or 4 times trying to find a favorite part, but it just flowed together so well, that i couldn't even pick a line that stood out for me. It was all just great.

Wrote with a depth that I trully admire. You did a wonderful job on this.

Bravo.

Always,
Jeannie

Theres something about a lily that i find calming :) i really did enyou reading this poem :) thank you for writing it :))

Very nice poem! I enjoyed reading this one, it was nicely penned with the wording you used. BTW thank you for commenting on my poem as well. 5/5