It was so much fun writing this with you.
I meant every word that went down on that piece pf paper..
I love you with all my heart!
Kitten xxx

Beautifully written piece of work.
Keep writing.

WiLd RoSe.

Please comment on mine.

You express more emotion in ways I could never do! 5/5 And thanks for the comment!

Wow, what a nice poem to brighten someone's day, im gonna add you to my favorites so i can look at this anytime i feel sad, it really brightened my day, beautiful work =]

brittany (MD)

Wow...this poem is so sweet! a cute couple ;)
what was really special about this one is that although i've read many poems that talk about how they'll be there for someone, this one uses words that made me want to read on, with a great flow too.
keep it up!
nuff luv x

This is a really sweet poem. We all have at least one friend like this and they are amazing. The flow was really great, as well as the rhyming, it was so natural, it didn't seem forced at all. Well done to you and your fiancee. =] 5/5

Tammie

Thats very beautiful! congrats! i hope the best for the both of u!

Marcus
I really loved this piece. The love between you and Gem shines here. Excellent job!

Whether you need someone to talk
Or a shoulder to cry on
You don't need to look very far
I'll be there to lean upon

Loved this stanza. I really liked them all. Brings back so many happy memories for me.
Wishing you both a lifetime of love and happiness.
Take Care Cindy

Good job =)))

This was a beautiful poem, it had a great flow, great rhythm...

"If you're feeling a tad upset
And more than a little blue
You won't be alone at all
I'll be there to help you through"

I loved that stanza. Keep it up!!

Beautiful poem. The flow was excellent and the emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

:Sarah:

5/5 excellent poem. your an awesome writer. look forward to reading more from you.

Honey, well done. You're getting quite a following =)
Love you loads
Kitten xx

Very cute...every once in a while, we need a man like that in our lives...nice one, Marcus!

Awh. This poem was so sweet. All of your poems are. Another wonderful write. :D I really, really liked the last three stanzas. The first two were good too, but those were the best. :D

Keep it up.
5/5