Strange New world

by Tine   Apr 12, 2007


I gazed into this world
that I wanted to conquer
before feeling what it would be like
to be alone outside

A part of this world
was nothing than air
and the rest was filled with you;
nothing more nor less

I must say that it’s addicting
to be in a world with you alone
to live and truly love this deeply
is indescribable, you know

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is such a cute poem. I actually enjoyed reading this piece. =] All the best and take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Remember to take away the ' in your poems. wrecks the flow. yet well done apart from that. so much love!

    5/5 david