Ok loved this poem it seemed so beautiful to me your word choice was amazing! cant belive it. Greatly written poem. Maybe if one day you put it into stanzas so it would be easier to read. None the less great job.~mel

This is really good. I liked it. Great read.

Always,
Koriey

5/5 =] excellent.. these 2 lines i really loved..

she always seemed to know what to say
to make all the rain clouds go away

beautiful write.

It was excellent! Beautiful! thats really all I can say
5/5