Dripping Wet and Clearly Depressed
by Kendall Apr 12, 2007
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Drip drip drop |
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17 years ago
by geeeeee
I liked how you used alliteration in your poem. "drizzle drowning drenching clouds" It all together strengthens the poem and I also liked how you used repition with the words "drip drip" throughout the poem because it enhanced the feelings associated in the poem. In other words I loved it :]
Very smart getting the title to rhyme.
All the best,
Bonnie
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