Hehe, i've just recently done one of these as well.
I love them =)
Just wanted to thank you for commenting on my fiance's two most recent poems, i know he'll be pleased
Your poems are fantastic
5/5
*gem*

Great poem. I liked it alot.
5/5

~Chelsea

Wow, I havnt seen this poem before its pretty amazing. I liked this the word choice was great and it came up looking very nice. Well done on this poem~mel

I know you wanted me to be critical but thats very hard with this poem because there wasn't anything there that I didnt like. I loved the words, I loved the fact that it was a different style that I hardly ever see, and I also loved the last 3 lines.. amazing.. and so true we all have to fight through the dark to find the light. Wonderful work.

Sweet a wonderful poem again

xxx alex xxx

This speaks very truly of life. It's very powerful for being short and to the point. Very very nicely done!! I love it! The flow and word choice is superb. Awesome job!! 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.