I like it... i think it's very well done.. 5/5 from me...

~xdenysiao~

I really liked the whole idea of creating "The devils game" Its kinda like an evil monopoly :]

"this is the devil's game
and it starts now"

This is such a great ending because as your reading the poem and you get to the end you think its all over but indeed just as you said it is basically only beginning. A great write!

Take Care,
Bonnie

I liked this poem alot, it added a chill to love. Sent shivers up my spine everytime I read:

"the devil's game"

I thought it was brilliant in general, the ending to me could have been better, but it still flowed beautifully throughout the whole piece :)

5/5

Quillx

I liked this poem alot

I really like the way you've written this.. it's written with trust, and signifies chance at it's undoubted strength. Well done. xx

"this is the devil's game
and you've been asked to join

this is not a choice
its a commitment
a burden
a contract
demand

this is the devil's game
and you have just been invited

this is the devil's game
the end is never exactly the same
and yet, all know it before they roll the die, before they pick a card
love is hard"

So true.
You never have a choice. It is truly depressing on how much you can be in love without having a choice in the matter and the Devil's Game tactic was Phenomenon!!! I was too busy reading this and so into it I didn't hear my own mother talking to me and she was standing right next to me! That's Fantastic!! Please keep writing you are gifted!
<3
5/5

~Ally

P.s- Lexi, That's not right and is just plain mean. >=[

Good poem, interesting concept...
do you dare to fall in love?
its not up to you

Yes I have and yes I always lost the game :)

Another excellent poem, you amaze me with your writing, it doesn't compare to any i've ever read, i love this! 5/5
if i read 1 more AMAZING poem of yours ur going into my favs, whether u like it or not :)

Warning: before you read this, i should warn you, only pain will come of playing, but then again, you don't have a choice

^^ I loved that, kind-of funny.

the devil's game
come and join us
come and play

^^A little scary

the rules
they don't exist
but if you don't follow them
you lose

^^No rules? so how can u lose, i like this line, it's different, and awesome.

places for play
anywhere
everywhere
and nowhere

^^Again, awesome line!

this is the devil's game
and you've been asked to join

^^So simple, but creepy!

this is the devil's game
and you have just been invited

this is the devil's game
the end is never exactly the same
and yet, all know it before they roll the die, before they pick a card
love is hard

^^love it.

this is the devil's game
and it starts now

^^Scary thought.

5/5

Indeed it's not a choice. Not gonna start down this path though.

DANG! This is amazing. It has emotion, and flow, and creativity and wow. I could go on for hours about how amazing this piece is. 5/5 for sure.

This piece is: I am speechless and have no clue what else I could honestly say.