Comments : The devil's game

  • 13 years ago

    by Denysia

    I like it... i think it's very well done.. 5/5 from me...

    ~xdenysiao~

  • 13 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I really liked the whole idea of creating "The devils game" Its kinda like an evil monopoly :]

    "this is the devil's game
    and it starts now"

    This is such a great ending because as your reading the poem and you get to the end you think its all over but indeed just as you said it is basically only beginning. A great write!

    Take Care,
    Bonnie

  • 13 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    I liked this poem alot, it added a chill to love. Sent shivers up my spine everytime I read:

    "the devil's game"

    I thought it was brilliant in general, the ending to me could have been better, but it still flowed beautifully throughout the whole piece :)

    5/5

    Quillx

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    I liked this poem alot

  • 12 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I really like the way you've written this.. it's written with trust, and signifies chance at it's undoubted strength. Well done. xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    "this is the devil's game
    and you've been asked to join

    this is not a choice
    its a commitment
    a burden
    a contract
    demand

    this is the devil's game
    and you have just been invited

    this is the devil's game
    the end is never exactly the same
    and yet, all know it before they roll the die, before they pick a card
    love is hard"

    So true.
    You never have a choice. It is truly depressing on how much you can be in love without having a choice in the matter and the Devil's Game tactic was Phenomenon!!! I was too busy reading this and so into it I didn't hear my own mother talking to me and she was standing right next to me! That's Fantastic!! Please keep writing you are gifted!
    <3
    5/5

    ~Ally

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    P.s- Lexi, That's not right and is just plain mean. >=[

  • Good poem, interesting concept...
    do you dare to fall in love?
    its not up to you

    Yes I have and yes I always lost the game :)

  • 12 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Another excellent poem, you amaze me with your writing, it doesn't compare to any i've ever read, i love this! 5/5
    if i read 1 more AMAZING poem of yours ur going into my favs, whether u like it or not :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Warning: before you read this, i should warn you, only pain will come of playing, but then again, you don't have a choice

    ^^ I loved that, kind-of funny.

    the devil's game
    come and join us
    come and play

    ^^A little scary

    the rules
    they don't exist
    but if you don't follow them
    you lose

    ^^No rules? so how can u lose, i like this line, it's different, and awesome.

    places for play
    anywhere
    everywhere
    and nowhere

    ^^Again, awesome line!

    this is the devil's game
    and you've been asked to join

    ^^So simple, but creepy!

    this is the devil's game
    and you have just been invited

    this is the devil's game
    the end is never exactly the same
    and yet, all know it before they roll the die, before they pick a card
    love is hard

    ^^love it.

    this is the devil's game
    and it starts now

    ^^Scary thought.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Failling Death

    Indeed it's not a choice. Not gonna start down this path though.

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    DANG! This is amazing. It has emotion, and flow, and creativity and wow. I could go on for hours about how amazing this piece is. 5/5 for sure.

    This piece is: I am speechless and have no clue what else I could honestly say.