This is Takeya [duh] This is a hella cute poem!!! I can't believe this sight is how we met each other!! it is soo kool well keep up the work!!

This is cute.. i see a few things wrong..

1. The poem is all in Caps.. maybe if you did not have it all in caps it would be easier to read
2. If you put it into stanza's then it would be easier to read.

Other then that i thought it was cute!..