That is funny because it's just so random! lol. I would have never thought about something like that to write. You got all of them rhyming too, well done. It actually had a good flow too. =]

Tammie

That was different and definitely made me smile. I needed something unique.

Mmm ... very interesting. I cannot say that I have ever read a poem like this. I like the creativity that your mind has David.

--Sher

A creative job, and dont forget Goran is Gore, lollllllllllllllllll
nice job so different

Hahahaha, i saw my name in it, tnx
u r great.............

A witty little piece ,I like the fact my name can be shortened to anything else lol although my dear mother often call me Juney.You even had two of boys names in there ,I hate that Andrew gets called Andy ,but am relieved that my James is not Jim ,far from it we call him Jay.

Very cute :0) Brought a smile to my night. Good job!
Take Care Cindy

A really unique poem David. it was a great poem. 5/5

Kalee

That is so cute...how did you come up with something like that? well done

Bethany

This is really cute

Cute little play on names.....like it!

Very good poem, i thought it was ineresting but had a very good flow, nice work 5/5.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Unique

Unique and cute =) 5/5 David!

Unique and cute =) 5/5 David!

Unique and cute =) 5/5 David!

This made me smile, very cute.

Lol without even reading your profile i knew u were aussie; really well written DAVO

That was so random but i thought it was cute;)

That was absolutely a random work. =]]