by Michelle18
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Aww this is a touching poem... it was written very well. |
by NearlyCrazy6
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THAT IS SO SWEET! |
by Shinobi
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Liked the idea of your presence by your loved one through prayers. Again I can't really see rhyming, but the flow and concept are nice. 5/5 |
by Kaila
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Very good the flow was a little off for me and I felt like you were almost there emotion wise 4/5 |