Cliche'd confusion

by Chelsey   Apr 14, 2007


I say I love you
You say I luv u too
I guess I donâ??t get it
We â??loveâ?? each other
But we both have too much going on
We donâ??t have the time to love
I guess its better to lose and wait
Than win and jump too fast
Whenever youâ??re ready
Iâ??ll be there to hold you
To give you what you need
To calm you
Ill be there for you to cry on my shoulder
Because I love you
You take my breath away
I know all of I say I love you
You say I luv u too
I guess I donâ??t get it
We â??loveâ?? each other
But we both have too much going on
We donâ??t have the time to love
I guess its better to lose and wait
Than win and jump too fast
Whenever youâ??re ready
Iâ??ll be there to hold you
To give you what you need
To calm you
Ill be there for you to cry on my shoulder
Because I love you
You take my breath away
I know all of this sounds so clichéd
But I promise its true babe.
I love you

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  • 18 years ago

    by dbaby

    Good i get what your saying this poem keeps it simple i like that, the reader can understand your point and apprecite it

  • 18 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I like the fact that there is actual honesty in this poem.

    "You take my breath away"

    Loved that line. It really stood out to me. Its amazing what true love can do to us. Taking our breath away. It was definetly one of the lines that contained a feeling of strength behind it.

    Hope everything works out for you too.
    Take Care,
    Bonnie
    x