Wont you love me back? ( Finished )

by Jason Fu   Apr 14, 2007


Life without you
makes my heart cry
i loved you and you loved me
i had a secret to tell you
i was scared to tell you
i love you so much
but once i telll you this
i'll be nothing more then just a person still loving you
i know you wont love me
but i will still, miss you,want you, and love you

if you still love me
will you let me kiss you on your lips? sweep you off your feet?
you are what makes my life great
without you its just a life waiting to end
i love you truly, madly, and deeply
wont you love me back?

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  • 18 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I liked this poem. Its good you were able to finish it :]

    "but i will still, miss you,want you, and love you"

    To me this sentence was really strong because it definetly had the feeling of desire and lust. Great write!

    All the best,
    Bonnie

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