Short and sweet nice job 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Every tear
That falls from a face
Is a tear of
Love
Hate
Pain
& Misery

^ How true that is!

This was short & simple. But held great meaning, and great truth in it. It flowed pretty well, for something so short.

My favorite line:
That one tear is a tear of expression

^ beautiful words, darlin'.

Excellent.

So simple and yet sooo sweet good job.. i especially loved that last line.. it very true.. good job! 5/5

Short but to the point.
You state what you're describing in less than 10 lines. WEll done! I couldn't find anything wrong. God Bless 5/5
<3tay

This poem was quite good actually. a lot better than the one i previous read. maybe sad poems are your strength?

Really short, but it's good. I liked it alot. well done! 5/5 take care.

~Chelsea

Good job

Very well writen, your work is inspiring me, and that takes quite a bit of work to do let me tell you. So this automaticly gets a 5/5 just for that

That was a great sad poem. Reading it made about twenty thousand different thoughts run off in my head for philosophy class

that one tear is a tear of expression

that line is very very deep. i loved it, great short poem again.

Another great poem, it was very well written and it was very true, crying isnt very fun and people who cause pain are not good people

I really lik this poem. Good work.

Josie
PS. And thank you for your comment on my poem. Much appreciated...

Wow. this is so true. its amazing! well done. they should put that in the dictionary under "tear"!

Wow I liked this one.. I liked how you described more than one reason that people cry, and I loved the short lines it kept it short sweet and to the point. The only critique I have is that it is kind of short and might be a little bit better under the quotes.. but thats just my opinion.

I'm loving it.
It's not perfection.
But perfection IS imperfection.
But isn't a tear that falls from a face
Might also be a tear of happiness?