"Think again because I'm through
Your nothing but a pathetic little shrewed"
Beautiful lines...Great poem...well penned!...filled with emotions...Kp up the Good work!5/5!
xxPoojaxx

I thought it was great , there was so much emotion surging through it, keep up the good work, 5/5

The title caught my eye. I found this to be quite interesting. Your word choice nice and the flow didnt go off track at all. Well done~mel

Wow really nice and deep.

5/5

~*Alex*~

I thought it was great , there was so much emotion surging through it. there were some thing made me think about my friend

I had to read this one after I read the title. It's a great title lol. The emotion here runs deep. It's definitley where it belongs in "dark" poems. Great flow too. 5/5

marcella

Great poem
tis real goood
i like it alot
i like the meaning
and emotion to it
something bad happened
real saddd
good poem through

Keenan